Right on dude....I feel ya I feel ya. The lyrics are good. Though ive never even tried to take credit for knowing how to write good lyrics, I can take credit for knowing what I like...and personally I think they need just a little bit more color. A little more flavor. A little something more in there that really does show how you felt and not just read how you felt. Other than that man....I was in the same place. Some good stuff there, keep it up! Id like to hear the music that goes with!